Sunday, December 29, 2013

Goal Setting for the New Year

Since I was a kid, I've always been a big list-maker. One of the most satisfying experiences, in my opinion, is making a list of all the things I hope to accomplish in a day/week/month/year and ticking them off one at a time till they're all done. I love that sense of completion I get from looking at a list upon which every task has a corresponding checkmark. I also learned early on to break up large jobs into small tasks so that I could simultaneously give myself achievable goals and positive reinforcement that would see me through to the end. This system has stood me well as a writer as well.

I have very ambitious long term goals, but the only way I'm going to see them to fruition is by setting a series of short term milepost goals that will lead me in the direction I want to go.

With this in mind, here are my goals for 2014 (yes, I realize this is a long list, but they're all attainable given the proper planning):

Writing Goals
  • Find representation (In process) for the book series with the goal of publishing Book 1 within a year
  • Meanwhile, write manuscript for Book 2 between January and May.
    • Write summaries for each character's storyline, with their key scenes detailed
    • Outline the chapters in order, interweaving those storylines
    • Organize the book into 3 acts (30-35 thousand words per part) in order to give the story structure
    • Create the Scrivener project for the book
    • Set a schedule for each week with a deadline for completing each of the parts (one per month?)
    • Maintain a record of words completed each week
    • When first draft of each section is complete, take a couple of days off and then do at least 3 rounds of revision
    • Update outline as needed until the entire manuscript is complete and ready to begin editorial process
  • Write at least 2 short stories in the summer of 2014 (related to the novel? unrelated?) and shop them for publication in the fall
  • Determine what manuscript I want to work on during The Stanley Hotel Writer's Retreat
Social Media Goals
  • Set a weekly/monthly schedule for regular blogging/posting
  • Learn how to use analytics to determine content goals
  • Find an admin assistant for my FB and Twitter to help manage postings if needed
Personal Goals
  • Schedule exercise into my weekly calendar 3 x per week and take it as seriously as I do my writing goals
  • Expand my container garden to grow more than just tomatoes this year
  • Reorganize my laundry room and consider purchasing new equipment
  • Learn to crochet
  • Dedicate one room for hobbies and organize supplies
  • Spring cleaning during the week of Spring Break to sort clutter, then store, toss, or donate as appropriate
  • Read 50 books using Goodreads to keep track of my goal
Notice that these are goals, not resolutions. Resolutions seem to always be broken. I am going to do these things, not just say I'm going to. Getting out my calendar now to make my plans. 2014 is going to be a good year.

What are your goals for the New Year?

Saturday, December 28, 2013

2013 Gratitude

I have a lot to be grateful for over this past year, so I thought I'd take a moment to appreciate the good things. There are lots more I could list, but these are the big things.
  1. I finished writing a book. Not my first book, but the first book I've really been serious about trying to perfect and sell. I'm going to say it again. I. FINISHED. WRITING. A. BOOK.
  2. I discovered that there was an audience for that book. I had hoped it would be true, but having people read the sample and then say "I want more" is wonderful confirmation.
  3. My family is my rock. I am so blessed with the many ways they support me. I could not have completed any of the goals I set for myself without their help, emotionally, physically, and financially. I am truly and deeply grateful.
  4. I have fantastic friends, both online and off, and they have supported me, given me encouragement, and made my life so much richer. From the bottom of my heart, thank you. You all know who you are, and you are the best.
  5. Layla is the best dog ever. Seriously.

  6. After nine years, my house is finally almost done. What a journey it has been! Can I get an "AMEN"? Honestly, this used to be my kitchen.

    Now my house looks like this.

    The difference is truly astounding to me.
  7. I have a dedicated office in my house at last, and I finally feel like I can do some serious work in this space.
  8. My co-workers are such great people to work alongside. I have never worked anywhere that was so warm and caring.
  9. My health has improved dramatically. This time last year, I was having constant asthma attacks and serious recurrent health problems. Thanks to a wonderful doctor and diligent effort, my asthma, thyroid, blood pressure, anemia, low immune system, and general fatigue are all under control, and in some cases the symptoms went away entirely. I would never have been able to finish writing my book if not for that change, and I am truly humbled by the difference a year makes.
  10. Going to the World Horror Convention in New Orleans was not only a fabulous vacation which I was thrilled to enjoy with my best friend in the whole world, but I also got over my fear of putting myself out there as a writer. I also met some extraordinary people, including my editor, RJ Cavender, for whom "thank you" is not enough.

  11. Speaking of RJ, he gets his own gratitude number. I am so lucky to have met him, and his work on my manuscript has taught me things I will carry with me always. He is also responsible for introducing me to an agent and giving me the courage to submit to her, and for that...well...just...that is huge. I will always be grateful.


  12. My best friend, Mike, gave me a printer and part of my Christmas gift office chair, plus he recommended several great apps for my iPad and the Scrivener software for my computer. He went with me to New Orleans. Moreover, he has listened to endless hours of me rattling on about my story without trying to push me to write the story his way, and that is rare. He has been supportive in every way a friend can be, and after almost 30 years of friendship, I am still honored to know him.

Thursday, December 19, 2013

Four Intriguing Questions #BlogHop #Books @therealdelia

Hello and welcome to my entry for the fabulous frog blog hop! Thank you to Alexandra Anthony for inviting me to play. Please make sure to stop by her website!


1. What are you working on now?
I just finished writing the finale of my upcoming novel, Ma Chère Antoinne. It's been sent off to my editor, and I'll be making revisions at the end of the month to send to a potential agent. I'm really excited about the book, and cannot wait to share it!
2. How is your current WIP different from others in the genre?

My book is a vampire mystery/thriller with a good dose of horror and romance that I think will appeal to a wide range of readers. There is a lot of edge-of-your-seat action that keeps you hooked, but it's also very character-driven with some historical figures you might recognize making appearances. I've incorporated some elements of classic horror, and put my own spin on the vampire mythology that I hope people will find interesting and compelling.
3. Why do you write?
The short answer is "because I need to," but really, I've always written. I wrote my first book when I was five, and I've had a compulsion that drives me. I love characters that move me and plots that are full of surprises. I wrote the story I would want to read, and hopefully others will enjoy it as well.
4. How does your writing process work?
I'm a big planner. I have notebooks I carry around with me, a whiteboard for plotting on my office wall, and I make extensive use of Evernote on my iPad or iPhone whenever I see something that makes me think "Hey, that would make an interesting story or scene."
I outline everything beforehand, though that outline is always being revised as I work. I do most of my writing in the Scrivener program, and break up that outline into chapter chunks that I can use as markers for myself as I write. That outline is very fluid, however. Once I get into the story, sometimes a scene just doesn't work the way I envisioned it would, and I have to change or scrap or combine elements as I go. Sometimes the flow of the story just isn't working for me, and I find myself shuffling chapters around or adding something in that I hadn't originally planned.
I work two other jobs, so I have to keep myself organized and schedule my time carefully. I set aside at least two hours every day for writing. If I have more time available, I use it. If I'm busy, I might only have time to make notes or do some revisions or research. All of that is moving my story forward, however, and I know that if I am patient and persistent, I can finish it.
I also revise many times. With this book, I did at least 15 rounds of edits before handing it off to my editor. I want the book to be the best it can be, and that means a lot of hard work without immediate payoff.
To meet another fabulous author, check out his Q&A blog hop on the following website…

Anthony Hogg, The Vampirologist

Thursday, December 12, 2013

Where I've been (Among other things)

Writery Things
During the month of November, I was quiet here, but my writing life has been extremely busy.

In October, I had a conversation with an agent, and she recommended to me that I increase the length of the novel in order to make it more marketable to mainstream publishers. Thus, I spent the three weeks leading up to Thanksgiving completing a 30,000 word addition to the text. The manuscript draft is now in the hands of my editor. After taking a week to catch my breath, I've begun planning the sequel while I wait for the annotations to come back. I'm also taking time to do some research, and I can't wait to use what I learn in the next book. Once my editor is finished looking through the text, I'll make corrections and then send it off with hopes of finding representation.


I'm also very excited to announce that I'll be attending The Stanley Hotel Writer's Retreat in October of 2014! It's a week-long retreat at the hotel that was the inspiration for Stephen King's The Shining. The event has been written up on FEARNet and on FANGORIA®, and I absolutely cannot wait. I haven't been to Estes Park in years, and to spend the time doing something I love with great people in such an inspiring location is a dream come true.

Readery Things 

The book club I lead has been reading classic horror this year, and we just completed Bram Stoker's Dracula. We've been comparing the book to various onscreen interpretations, including the new NBC television series. Everyone agrees that while the show departs significantly from the text of the novel, we love what the writers are doing and find Jonathan Rhys Meyers depiction compelling and exciting. If you haven't had a chance to catch this great show, I highly recommend it.


At the beginning of the year, I set myself a challenge to read 50 books, which works out to approximately a book a week, and I'm seven books away from reaching that goal. Many of the books I read were part of a series. Last year, I read all of the George R.R. Martin A Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) series, and this year it was Sherrilyn Kenyon's Dark Hunter series that dominated my reading list. This year also saw the end of Charlaine Harris' Southern Vampire Mysteries, an ending that was bittersweet for me. I kept up with Karen Marie Moning's Fever series by reading her newest and thoroughly entertaining installment, Iced (I'm very much looking forward to reading Burned once it's released). I also read Cassandra Claire's Mortal Instruments series and the Beautiful Creatures series by Kami Garcia and Margaret Stohl. Several standalone novels were part of my reading list, including most memorably Neil Gaiman's The Ocean at the End of the Lane which was stunningly lyrical and heartbreaking.

Doggy Things (Because Layla is annoyed at not being the center of attention)
I'm just going to leave this here. Her face speaks for itself.

 
Your Turn...

Tell me stuff!
  • What are you reading/writing?
  • What's the best thing that's happened with you this year so far?
  • What are you looking forward to next year?
  • What is your pet doing right now?

Sunday, October 27, 2013

Jonathan Rhys Meyers' Dracula Scorches the Small Screen



One of the promotional images for NBC's Dracula reboot describes it as "Old Legend. New Blood." They certainly delivered on that promise in last Friday's premiere episode. 

Dracula has been remade dozens of times since Bram Stoker first penned the novel in 1897. Each actor who played the part brought something new to the role. Every interpretation gave a new spin on the legend. This incarnation dusts off the old tropes and breathes new life into a story everyone thought they knew. 

I was aware going in that in order to create a season (hopefully multi-season) weekly drama based on a single novel, the writers would have to introduce new storylines to keep the audience tuned in. But what they created far exceeded my expectations. There are tons of surprises in store for even those who thought they knew everything there was to know about the characters. In addition, the production values are truly excellent, the costumes lavish, the acting superb, and the special effects are understated and powerful. 

The most effective special effect, however, is Meyers himself. The way his eyes glittered as he looked on Mina Murray from the shadows spoke volumes about the character of Dracula and hinted at things to come in a way that the script could never do. He has a power and charisma on screen that is incendiary, and it makes the audience root for him, even with the knowledge that he is not the hero. Or is he? I, for one, can't wait to find out. 
If you haven't seen the pilot episode, you're in for a treat. I plan to keep watching every week to see how the plot unfolds...and to see more of Jonathan Rhys Meyers. 

Thursday, October 17, 2013

Eagle Radio Interview with Thomas Gilson

Yesterday, I was interviewed by Thomas Gilson from Central Methodist University’s Eagle Radio about my writing. Since Blogger, WordPress, and Facebook all lack the ability to post audio files, I created a Tumblr account in order to host the interview file in it's entirety. Tom and I had a lot of fun doing the interview together, and I think it came out pretty well. I hope you all enjoy!
If you would like to hear more from Tom or listen to Eagle Radio, click through and just hit play.

Thursday, October 3, 2013

Exciting News!

I've kept it under my hat for a month, wanting to wait till there was something definite to say, but it's time. People have been asking me about the book, and I'm ready now to talk about the reason for my delay.

In September, I made arrangements with R.J. Cavender from The Editorial Department to annotate my manuscript of Ma Chère Antoinne. Yesterday, I got them back from him, and I don't think I've ever made such a great investment in myself.

Annotation, for those of you who don't know, consists of notes that are made throughout the document. I'm notorious for annotating my books at home (though never library books, I swear), and it's the same technique I use when grading papers in my composition classes. Some of the notes are corrections or suggestions while others are reactions to the text. It's a way of interacting between reader and writer--a conversation.

I think if I hadn't had the experience of giving just these kinds of notes to others, I'd have felt very defensive and frightened at the prospect of reading through 265 pages of someone else's commentary on my work. But setting ego aside and seeing the annotations as a conversation rather than a threat makes a potentially anxiety-ridden situation into a learning experience that can be transformative.

Having the right editor makes all the difference. That sounds obvious, but it truly isn't.

I've seen "editors" who simply marked sentence level issues but who never really appeared to engage with the text. That's not editing. That's proofreading. I've also seen "editors" who try to force a writer to give up his/her own voice in order to make the content fit their own desires. That's not editing either. That's rewriting.

Good editing, just like good teaching, engages in a conversation with the writer, reacting to what is working right as well as to what isn't.

The best situation is when an editor's sensibilities match those of the writer. They just "get" it. They understand the writer's intent and help hone the text to achieve that goal.

That's exactly how I feel as I'm studying the notes. I couldn't be happier with the work R.J. did for me, and I can't thank him enough for his attention to detail. I'm only just starting Chapter 6, and I can already see how much cleaner, tighter, and better the text has become. Not only that, but I'm starting to internalize the lessons I'm gleaning from his notes, and that is a gift I will carry with me always.

All this means that Book 2 is on hold while I complete my changes. But after learning what R.J. has to say, I'm confident that Book 1 is going to be vastly improved, and the things I'm learning will carry over into the rest of the series.

By nature, I want what I want when I want it, and I have a hard time waiting patiently for the things I've set my mind on. I'm most impatient with myself. It's easy for me to become annoyed with myself for not being able to complete a project as quickly as I'd like. However, when it comes to my writing, I remind myself that the wait will be worth it, both for me and for those who will read it.

Writing a book is like deciding to run a marathon. It's not something you can just wake up one morning and do. It takes training, time, planning, dedication, and a willingness to accept that natural talent on it's own isn't going to get you to the finish line. It means getting up every morning, even on the days when you don't feel like it, all with the belief that the achievement will make any short-term hardship fade in time.

Writing a series is like running a series of marathons back to back. That is what I've taken on.

So please be patient with me. I'm running as fast as I can. And I promise to make it worth the wait.

Friday, September 20, 2013

Things You Should See, Read, Do!

With two jobs in addition to my writing (not including being Layla's dogmom, which she informs me should be a full-time career), I don't have a ton of free time to watch TV or movies or for recreational reading or shopping or whatever. Therefore, I'm pretty selective when it comes to how I spend that time. These are a few things I am glad I spend time on, and I think you will be too.

The new FOX television series Sleepy Hollow
If you're not watching this show, you're making a huge mistake. Fans of Supernatural, you should be tuning in. I guarantee you'll love it.
Nicole Beharie as Abbie Mills is a strong, smart, capable woman, and we need more of those. Also, she's beautiful and sexy without having to be sexualized, and that is refreshing as well.
Tom Mison as Ichabod Crane has great chemistry with his leading lady, and his flashes of wit and humor are the perfect balance to the weighty "save-the-world-from-the-apocalypse" drama. Plus, ladies, just look at him. Seriously, go Google and take a look. I'll wait. ...................... Mmm hmm. Like I said.
The plot is intriguing, surprising, suspenseful, and not just a little bit scary. I'm hoping this show is around a long time.
Australian Musician Matt Corby
His soulful sound is nothing short of inspiring. If you give him a listen, I think not only will you agree, but you'll go right out to buy every song just like I did. Here's a sample.
 

Warning, he could become addictive.

John Dies at the End
The book is so bizarre and hilarious, I was pretty sure there was no way a movie adaptation could do it justice. Then I saw it was made by the same folks who did Bubba Ho Tep (one of my very favorite Bruce Campbell films), and I knew all bets were off. I ignored the reviews which were done by people who don't appreciate B cult movies, and man, am I glad I did. Did they include everything in the novel? Heck no. That would be impossible. However, they did stay true to the spirit of the book, and I loved every wacky thing that happened.

The BBC Radio Dramatization Broadcast of Neil Gaiman's Neverwhere
I have loved Neverwhere for years. I don't know how many. Just trust me, it's lots. I've been a fan of Neil Gaiman since 1989 and have read nearly everything he's ever written. I say "nearly" simply because he's written SO MUCH, it is of course possible that I've missed something, but I never did so on purpose. But this dramatization is truly fabulous.

With readers like Christopher Lee, James McAvoy, Natalie Dormer, David Harewood, Sophie Okonedo, Benedict Cumberbatch, Anthony Head, the tale comes alive and will remain in your thoughts long after you've finished listening.

Note: Unless you like having creepy nightmares, you might want to listen in a well-lit area in daylight since Benedict Cumberbatch's depiction of the Angel Islington is chilling. Then again, if you enjoy that kind of thing, well, then by all means go right on and ignore my warning. Just don't say I didn't tell you.

Sunday, August 4, 2013

Delicate Balance

Made more progress on Book 2 today, and it's definitely going to some very dark places. This time the stakes are even higher, and you'll learn a lot more about all of the characters. Everyone has something to hide, and as events unfold, they'll all have much more to lose as well.

Today, I did a little research on Chicago and Venice in order to fill in more details on the chapters I've already written, fleshing out a few essential specifics and dropping some subtle foreshadowing of what's to come while I was at it. Then I tightened the writing and completed a first revision of the text.

I tend to do at least four revisions before I do a detailed proofreading. Those are usually not done until I'm through with an entire section, but since I made a few changes/tweaks to the plot that will follow through the rest of this half of the novel, I needed to make sure the earlier chapters adequately lead up to what happens next.

Tomorrow, I'm getting back into the swing of things after work. I've got two more weeks till the students return, so I want to make the most of my time in the evenings between now and then. I'm setting aside three hours every night after work, and then on the weekend I'm writing at least four hours. This will be my last long weekend before the summer is over.

It matters to me that as I write, I strike a delicate balance of giving just the right amount of description. I am not likely to have long descriptive passages or soliloquizing narration that doesn't move the plot forward. Having been a technical writer and having taught it for several years now, I work hard to keep the writing concise, tight, and compelling. Readers need some room for their imaginations to work, and too much detail can ruin a scene, bog down the flow of the story, and slow down the pace. Plus, I don't want to give too much away too fast and spoil the surprises. Everyone has secrets, and I intend to make sure they're not revealed until the right moment. This series should keep you on an intensely thrilling ride, and that is only achieved if I keep things moving forward. I also want each chapter to propel you into the next, driving you to keep reading to find out what happens next. That means several cliffhangers that motivate the reader to breathlessly turn the pages one after another till the end. To me, that's the ultimate sign of success--a reader who can't wait for the next chapter. Every piece of description has a purpose. Every factual detail is there for a reason.

I don't have a title yet, but it's in the works. I'm kicking around a few ideas, and once I've found one that sticks, I'll be making an announcement. In the meantime, I'm promising more thrills, more danger, and more excitement.

Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Self-Promotion for Introverts

So you've written a great book. You've had a good editor go through it to make the manuscript the best it can be. You've bought a fabulous cover from a graphic artist. You've uploaded the book to CreateSpace, Smashwords, Kindle, Nook, Kobo. It's there, ready to be read. Only problem is, you are afraid of the whole selling aspect of the process. Facebook and Twitter and blogging seem like distractions from what you really want to do, which is sit alone in a quiet space and write your heart out.

I know a lot of authors who are introverted people. That makes sense, really. Writing is primarily a solitary activity. That personality trait is an asset to writers in that respect. However, there are some serious downsides to being an introverted author as well.

Just the other day, I saw an author post on her Facebook page "I'm not really comfortable with self-promotion," and then she proceeded awkwardly asking people to sort of, kind of, maybe look at her book if it wasn't too much trouble.

I understand wanting to seem humble, but this sort of approach to the situation only made her seem to have no confidence in the quality of her work. No one will buy a book from a person who seems to feel that they're not offering anything of value. If you're not certain of yourself, no one else will be either. And if you're not comfortable telling people about your work, then maybe a career in writing is not for you.

Yes, being an author is about writing. But you also have to think about the business end of the process too. You're creating a product. That product won't sell if you're not willing to put yourself out there and promote it.

Even famous authors who "have people for that" still do their own promotion in addition. They go on book tours and to conferences. They make speeches. They make commercials. They blog about their projects. They tweet about their work. They are interviewed by journalists. All of that is self-promotion. And that is half of the work of being an author, if you plan on making a career out of it.

You are not just selling the book. You're selling yourself. You're selling your name as a brand. And people want confidence in the product they're buying, whether it's a novel or a pair of pants. Coke didn't become a household name without the executives being willing to promote it. The same is true for authors.

The main problem seems to me to be a matter of confidence and of not wanting to seem like you're an egomaniac. But it's important to remember that being confident does not make you a braggart. Unless you plan on just passing around a copy of your book for friends and family or are content being the next Emily Dickenson and waiting to publish after you're long dead, you're going to have to get over the fear of self-promotion.

Ask yourself these questions:
  • Who else knows your story better than you do? 
  • Who else understands your vision completely? 
  • Who else do you trust to fully express those ideas to others? 
Even if you've got a publishing contract with a top agency, you are going to be expected to step forward and say "Hey! I wrote this thing, I'm proud of it, and I think you'll like it because of X, Y, Z." And if you're self-publishing, there is just you as a one-person show to sell others on your work. So stop selling yourself short and get busy!

Having an online presence only works if you make it work for you. That doesn't mean posting "BUY MY BOOK" over and over. It means building a rapport with people who are interested in the same things you're interested in. It means networking with other authors in your same genre. And yes, occasionally saying "MY BOOK IS AWESOME, AND YOU SHOULD BUY IT!" Your writing should make you excited. And excitement is infectious.

If you think your work isn't good enough, work harder. Make it better. It's that simple.

If you've done your best, then get busy telling people about it so they can be as energized by what you've written as you were when you sat down in that room by yourself and let your imagination go. You've got to be passionate, head-over-your-heels, bursting-at-the-seams excited about your story to carry it through to the end when you're writing. Let that passion drive you and guide you to then share your creation with the world. Because that is what is at the heart of self-promotion. It's not begging for money. It's giving readers all of the emotion and effort that you put into what you made. It's sharing your imagination with the world.

Monday, July 1, 2013

Character Interview: Claire Marie

  1. What is your name? Do you have a nickname?
    My name is Claire Marie Hapsburg. At least, that's my name right now. I've had many nicknames. *smiles*
  2. What is your hair color? Eye color?
    I have blonde hair and blue eyes.
  3. Who are your friends and family? Who do you surround yourself with? Who are the people you are closest to?
    My...child is named Raul. I have other children who died, and I think about them all the time. *pauses, looking away for a moment, then smiles, looking back up* My assistant, Crystal, helps me run my antique shop. She and I are good friends. There are very few people I would say I'm close to. I have my reasons.
  4. Where were you born? Where have you lived since then? Where do you call home?
    I was born in Austria, and I've lived many places since that time. Currently, I live in the Central West End of St. Louis, Missouri.
  5. Where do you go when you're angry?
    *laughs* I try not to let that happen.
  6. What is your biggest fear? Who have you told this to? Who would you never tell this to? Why?
    *shifty eyes* I can't answer that question.
  7. Do you have a secret?
    Darling, you don't get to be my age without having secrets.
  8. What makes you laugh out loud?
    My sweet little dog, Pom Pom.
  9. When have you been in love? Had a broken heart?
    Oh, many times. But I try to leave the past where it is. No sense in rehashing old wounds.
  10. What is in your refrigerator right now? On your bedroom floor? On your nightstand? In your garbage can?
    *raises an eyebrow* In my refrigerator? Well, not food. My bedroom floor has lovely antique rugs. My nightstand has an alarm clock, a lamp, and whatever book I'm reading at the time. As for my garbage can, I recycle most things, so there is very little in the garbage can. Raul insists upon it.
  11. Look at your feet. Describe what you see there.
    I love high heels. I always have.
  12. When you think of your childhood kitchen, what smell do you associate with it? Why is that smell so resonant for you?
    *shakes head* I never was allowed to be in the kitchen. I was scolded for being in the way. But I associate my childhood with the scent of roses. The gardens at home were full of them. *soft smile*
  13. You are doing intense spring cleaning. What is easy for you to throw out? What is difficult for you to part with? Why?
    It is easy for me to part with most things, but I have a real attachment to items from my past, especially things that are related to my childhood or to my children.
  14. It’s Saturday at noon. What are you doing? Give details.
    *chuckles* Sleeping, of course. I work at night, so I am never up that early.
  15. What is one strong memory that has stuck with you from childhood? Why is it so powerful and lasting?
    Hmm...I remember my grandmother teaching me to sew and to do decorative needlework. It was one of the few things she said I did truly well. She was a hard woman, my grandmother. It wasn't easy to please her. I was proud to earn her praise in that.
  16. You are getting ready for a night out. Where are you going? What do you wear? Who will you be with?
    A night out? *smiles* I work nights, generally, so I wear a lot of sweater sets. I do love to dress up, but I don't have so many occasions to do so these days.
  17. What do you consider your greatest achievement?
    *soft laugh* I can't answer that.
  18. What is your idea of perfect happiness?
    *bites lip thoughtfully* Perfect happiness would be spending time with my family.
  19. What is your current state of mind?
    I'm very well, thank you.
  20. What is your favorite occupation?
    I own an antique shop. Of the various occupations I've had, it's the most relaxing.
  21. What is your most treasured possession?
    Oh, I have several. I can't really choose one. I keep them locked away.
  22. What or who is the greatest love of your life?
    *sighs* I am afraid it hurts too much to answer that question, my dear.
  23. What is your favorite journey?
    *raises an eyebrow* Favorite journey? I'm a homebody, so I'd rather not travel any more than necessary.
  24. What is your most marked characteristic?
    My sense of style. Everyone says so.
  25. When and where were you the happiest?
    *shifts uncomfortably* Are all these questions like this?  I really don't want to answer that.
  26. What is it that you most dislike?
    Being alone.
  27. Which living person do you most despise?
    Is this a trick question? I honestly can't answer this either. Next!
  28. What is your greatest regret?
    *looks away* These questions are unpleasant. I thought you said this would be a fun activity. *frowns* Losing my children.
  29. Which talent would you most like to have?
    I am not musical.
  30. Where would you like to live?
    I'm happy where I am.
  31. What is the quality you most like in a man?
    Loyalty.
  32. What is the quality you most like in a woman?
    Strength of will.
  33. What is the trait you most deplore in yourself?
    I often give my trust too easily.
  34. What is the trait you most deplore in others?
    Lying.
  35. What do you most value in your friends?
    Loyalty and sincerity.
  36. Who is your favorite hero of fiction?
    Hmm...Lestat de Lioncourt. I do enjoy Anne Rice's excellent novels.
  37. On what occasions do you lie?
    *laughs* Oh darling, a lady never tells.
  38. Which words or phrases do you most overuse?
    You had probably best ask Raul that question. I never pay attention to a thing I say.
  39. How would you like to die?
    *big laugh* Is there anyone who has an answer to that? I'd prefer it never happens.

Saturday, June 22, 2013

Element Part 2 from CM Doporto

CM Doporto's latest release, Element Part 2, is out at last, and what a great installment to her series this is! Part 1 left me hanging, and I couldn't wait to see what happened next.

I don't want to spoil by saying too much, so I'm going to give you the official description to get your imagination going:
College student, Natalie Vega, struggles in her quest to learn how she can have a normal life, which includes her boyfriend Ryan, and also help the world that has been experiencing the effects of global warming. While her supernatural powers are unknown and are a secret to most in the world, an evil business tycoon learns of her abilities and has other plans for Natalie and his empire.
If you have read Part 1 already, you know how well CM Doporto spins a story. If you haven't had a chance to check out the Element series, you're in for a treat. This New Adult Fantasy Romance will keep your attention from start to finish.

You can purchase your digital copy of Element Part 2 on Amazon or Barnes and Noble.

If you did’t get a copy of Element, Part 1 – you can dowload your FREE eBook copy at all major eBook retailers: Amazon and Barnes & Noble.

In addition, you can vote for CM Doporto's amazing cover in The Book Boost Blog's June cover contest!

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Friday, June 21, 2013

New Orleans World Horror Convention Wrap Up

I spent last week in New Orleans, attending the World Horror Convention. In addition to making some new friends, I also pitched my book and sat in on several great panel discussions that taught me a lot about the market and about genre publishing.

The Hotel Monteleone

Fantastic Swag from the WHC

 
Video of some of the things I saw/did in New Orleans

The pitch sessions went extremely well. I've sent off my manuscript to three different people, and now the waiting begins. Hopefully, I'll know something in a month or so.

In the meantime, I'm going to be working on Book 2 (still untitled), and trying to get ahead on that while I've got my momentum going. I also want to get as much done as possible before the summer is over. Once the fall semester starts, I'll have to slow down a little on my writing once more in order to keep up with my other obligations.

The next book has already been outlined, and I've written up a plan for the chapters. Of course, as I write, the characters may lead me in ways I haven't anticipated, but that's what I love. I have some new characters added into the mix that I think people will really enjoy, and I'm doing a great deal of research to prep my mind for what lies ahead.
  • Of course, I've got a lot of background info for my characters. I never like to be too tied to literal facts when the story can benefit from embellishment, but I do think it's absolutely essential to read as much as I can about the real lives of the people I'm writing about before I just start making stuff up. Then again, they are vampires, so you can't expect everything to be factual in every detail. This is fiction, not biography.
  • I'm also going to be taking a course in forensics over the fall semester, which I'm extremely excited about. I've already bought the book and have taken tons of notes, poring through it in detail. I think it will enhance what I've already written and open up new avenues throughout the series.
The entire experience left me feeling even more energized to keep working and improving and moving forward with the next part of the story. I hope that in the next few weeks and months to have some exciting news. Whether or not a publishing deal comes out of the convention, I'm more determined than ever that if those three people aren't interested, I will find the folks who are. Patience and hard work will eventually pay off.

Sunday, June 9, 2013

Ma Chère Antoinne live on Amazon Kindle!

The completed Kindle version of Ma Chère Antoinne is now online and available for download. Only $4.99, less than the price of a burger and fries and lots more fun.

Vampires, mystery, horror, suspense, romance...it's all there!

Check the video below for reviews of the sneak peek edition.

Nook and paperback versions are on their way soon, and there will be release celebrations coming up starting the last week of June.

If you'd like to be the first to know about these other editions, special events, giveaways, or release dates for Book 2 in the series, email me at deliaremington13@gmail.com to receive updates and newsletters in your inbox.

Monday, June 3, 2013

Revisions, Revisions, Revisions

I did it! The whole thing is done!! 

Now the real work begins - fine tuning it until it's ready for submission. 

I already completed global edits, reading through it three times to check for plot flow and storyline detail consistency. That leaves proofreadung and final editorial additions/subtractions/changes. 

For me, the best way for me to ensure that I catch every error is to read it out loud. If I stumble over my words as I read aloud, then there's something wrong that I need to fix. Generally it's a typo or missing comma, but I sometimes also catch repeated words that need variation in the text or fixing voice to make each character sound distinct from all the others. It's meticulous and time consuming. I have a week and a half before the conference. Good thing I have taught writing and been a tech writer and proofreader in my past. I have the experience to do that sort of work quickly. 

I know that any publisher will want to have their own editor go through it if they plan to accept my book, and if I decide to self publish instead, I'll hire someone to do that for me. Even award winners need an editor. But my whole life has been preparing me for this, and though I know some people groan at editing work, I really actually enjoy the process. To me, that's what makes the difference between a good story and one that knocks your socks off. I've seen typos in famous people's books, and those errors really stand out to me. I don't want that to happen to people reading my book. I don't want any errors to distract the readers and pull them out of the story. 

Wish me luck! 

Friday, May 31, 2013

Editing is Happening...

Just printed my book, all but the last four chapters which are still in process. Starting editing/proof reading today.

Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Ma Chère Antoinne Main Character Dream Casting

If I could choose any actors to play the main characters in a movie adaptation of Ma Chère Antoinne, I'd select the ones shown below. Sadly, River Phoenix is no longer with us, but he is strong in my memory.



Sunday, May 26, 2013

I love it when a plan comes together....

Exciting things are happening this week! I'm on a five day staycation, spending my time finishing up my novel. By the end of my time off on Tuesday night, I intend to have the first draft totally completed and be ready for edits.

In order to make it easier to make that happen, several things had to be in place.
On the Homefront:
After a very long wait, my new home office is completely finished and my furniture and books are all in place. No more blaming my surroundings for unproductive days. I love the colors, I love the furniture, and I love being surrounded by books. The room is comfortable and finished exactly the way I envisioned. I can't imagine a better space for writing than this, and I feel such a sense of peace knowing that now it's complete and I can focus my energies on more important things.
Layla insisted that there was not enough emphasis on dogs in the room, but now that I've added her bed to the space, she's forgiven me. She makes a good writing companion. She is quiet when I need it, reminds me when it's time to eat, and listens without interruption to my ideas. She also reminds me that sometimes you have to get up and walk around and get a little exercise too, and that helps me stay fresh and focused. Maybe someday I'll write a book about her, but she's okay with that project staying on the back burner...for now.

In my World of Pure Imagination:
I have been doing some more research and backstory creation for my characters, finding ways to flesh them out in my mind so I can do the same on paper.
  • New Characters - There are a couple of new characters that I'm introducing into the text. One will be added to chapters I've already written, taking a character who was previously unnamed and barely described and giving her life. I decided that her character deserved more attention, and therefore she will be highlighted in places and given more time centerstage. She adds an element of authenticity and realism that I think enhances the storyline I've already written. The other new character is one that I initially wrote, then removed, and now have decided belongs in the story after all. It's a minor character, but still necessary for good storytelling, I think.
  • Research - I've been doing some research for those characters based on historical figures, and I'm very excited with what I've found. One character in particular turned out to have a true story and myth surrounding her that almost exactly mirrors what I'd already dreamed up on my own. I love that my creative mind came up with something that is very nearly the truth, and I now feel that I have much more firm ground to stand on when filling in her backstory for my readers.
  • Attention to Detail - It's important to me that I get my forensic details right. To that end, I had a long discussion with a professor of forensics who invited me to sit in on his course this fall. He also suggested some readings for me, and I'm taking his advice to heart. I hope that my story will benefit from what I learn, both in this book and in the sequel. Yep, you heard me. SEQUEL.
  • Sequel - I'm certain that this book is a series now. I'd tried to talk myself out of that, but it started to feel rushed, and my characters have much more to say than one book's worth of material. This storyline is only just beginning, and I can see a lot more exciting things to come as they progress. You may as well settle in and get comfortable. Get a snack. I've got a long story to tell, and it's only getting more exciting with each chapter.

Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Tuesday, May 7, 2013

Busy Week!

No Vampires in Pop Culture Feature this Week

This week is hectic in the extreme, but soon the semester will be over and I'll have a little breathing room to do the things I really need to get done. In addition to finishing Ma Chère Antoinne, I have some reviews to write, my garden to get in, some doctor's appointments, and I'll be moving into my new office upstairs at last (photos to come). My Vampires in Pop Culture Feature will be delayed until next week, but I plan to make it a great one.

In the meantime, enjoy the lovely spring weather with all its radiance and splendor.

Monday, May 6, 2013

Nook and iBook and Paperback! Oh my! We're not in Kindle anymore....

I'm formatting the sneak peek for Nook and iBook as we speak.

Well, it's more like I'm waiting for them to verify my sales while I make another pot of coffee and keep hitting the refresh button, but you get the picture.

At any rate, people asked me about other formats, so I'm setting up my accounts and getting familiar with the formatting expectations and software peculiarities specific to those platforms. The learning curve is smacking me in the face right now. However, once I get through the process with this sneak peek version, it should make it much easier once I'm ready to upload the complete book since I'll know what I'm doing by then.

My CreateSpace account is set up and waiting as well, so once the book is finished, all I have to do is upload the file and paperbacks will be available too. I plan to pay the nominal fee to make them available through bookstore distributors.

The timing of all this hinges on whether I get a publisher/agent or not. I'm certainly hoping so, because I'd rather be writing than fiddling with technical issues of the uploads. However, if it doesn't happen this summer, I'll be selling the book myself while I keep sending in submissions. Either way, the book will be published, and I fully intend to keep on writing regardless.

So while I'm cursing the screen and searching for the last Oreo in the package out of frustration, I'm also really excited and happy. Even good change can be stressful. But this time last year, I didn't have a book at all and didn't have a thought of needing to learn this stuff. Writing was just something I did in my spare time. Publishing it was something I dreamed about but never thought I could actually do. I'm not sure what pushed me over the edge, but there was this little voice inside that said "It's time."

And so here I am, doing the thing I always wanted to do and trusting that there will be an audience who loves the story as much as I do. Trusting myself to tell it. And trusting that "someday" is almost here.

Thank you!

I am honored and thrilled that my one day only sale was such a success! Wow! Thank you to everyone who downloaded the book and to those who shared the link with others as well. By the end of the sale, the sneak peek was ranked #49 in Historical Fiction, and #1966 overall in Free Kindle books, so that makes me really excited and grateful.





I hope you all enjoy it. It's just a taste of what's to come in the full version, but I hope it's enough to whet your appetite.

The book is nearly complete. I plan to have the first draft done by the end of the month, then spend 2-4 weeks on edits. I'm still on track for a summer release, and though I don't yet have a firm date, as soon as I know when it will be available, I will let you know.

If you would like early notice, please email me at deliaremington13@gmail.com and I will add you to my mailing list.

You can also "like" my Facebook page to find out about events and giveaways I'll be doing as the time draws near.

Thank you again, and happy reading!

Saturday, May 4, 2013

FREE! Cinco De Mayo Special this Sunday!

ONE DAY ONLY!

On Sunday, May 5, the Sneak Peek Edition of my upcoming novel, Ma Chère Antoinne, is free on Amazon Kindle!

If you haven't read it, there's no better time to check it out! And if you already have your copy, share it with your friends! It's free all day! 

Click here to download:
Sneak Peek Edition, Ma Chère Antoinne

Thursday, April 25, 2013

Vampires in Pop Culture Feature: Moonlight


Moonlight was only on for one season in 2007-2008, but what a season it was. Five years later, I still miss it, and the show still holds up even with time.

Private detective Mick St. John (Alex O'Loughlin) was smouldering in every scene and the chemistry between him and reporter Beth Turner (Sophia Myles) was hot enough to set the screen on fire.

I loved the back and forth "will-they-won't-they" each week, and the tension when Mick's ex-wife Coraline (Shannyn Sossamon) made an appearance kept me on the edge of my seat and desperate for answers. Just when I thought I hated her, I'd see something that made me wonder if she was really so bad as we'd been led to believe. If the show had been continued, I really hoped for more of her story.

But I have to say that my favorite character was none of the three corners of the love triangle but Mick's wisecracking rich sidekick, Josef Kostan (Jason Dohring). The wicked humor of Josef was a delight, and he always seemed to say just what the rest of us in the audience were thinking:

Josef Kostan: So, have you sealed the deal yet?
Mick St. John: It's not about sex.
Josef Kostan: Everything's about sex.
Mick St. John: I'm 52 years older than her, I drink blood bought from the morgue, and I tend to bite down when I...
Josef Kostan: Some women like that.
But Josef also showed a secret heart of gold and over the course of the season, it became clear why he and Mick were such close friends. His story was one I really was begging to hear, and it disappointed me that we only got a glimpse into his backstory.

Each episode of Moonlight was smart, sexy, exciting, and full of mystery. Mick's narration made it feel like an old time detective story, but with a supernatural twist that made it fresh and unpredictable. The writers managed to make a show that was full of surprises, and when I heard that CBS had decided to cancel it before it really had enough time to reach its potential, I was really disappointed. I think they missed out on a great opportunity by not taking a chance on a vampire mystery/romance. The same year, True Blood premiered on HBO, and obviously, audiences were quite willing to watch and keep coming back for more. Moonlight could definitely have given it a run for it's money if CBS had been willing to take a chance on it.

Episodes of Moonlight are available on DVD or can be downloaded from Amazon, Netflix, or iTunes. If you missed it, you're in for a real treat. And if you haven't seen it in a while, it's definitely worth rewatching.

Sookie Stackhouse Southern Vampire Mystery Series: Why Spoilers are Jerks

I've been a Sookie fan from Book One. Some might say I'm a rabid fan.

Fans have been divided into teams:
  • Team Bill
  • Team Alcide
  • Team Eric
  • Team Quinn
  • Team Sam
The HBO True Blood series only fanned the flames of those factions, with a great deal of online rivalry, sometimes rancor, happening on all sides.

As for myself, however, I've always been Team Sookie. I want whatever is best for HER. She's the character I identified with. She's the one I cared about. She's the one I rooted for. And she's the one that kept me coming back again and again, book after book, wanting more.

Now that the final book in Sookie's saga, Dead Ever After, is set for release, some jerk got hold of a copy early and decided to spoil it for fans around the world by posting the ending on Amazon.

Seriously? If Mrs. Harris' publisher doesn't sue for damages, I will be very much surprised. But more importantly, fans everywhere should be outraged.

You know those people. The ones who have to know it all. They gossip about other people and get a special pride out of knowing the dirt on someone. They like seeing someone else suffer because it makes them feel superior to say "I knew it FIRST!"

I remember waiting in line in 2005 to buy a copy of J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince and some jerk purchased his copy, flipped to the back of the book, and yelled out "DUMBLEDORE DIES!!!" Children sobbed. Adults wanted to punch him in the face. And the bookstore kicked him out. But the damage was done. All the anticipation was gone. We'd all been robbed of the chance to be surprised, and I will never forgive that person. I don't know his name. I don't know what he looks like. But my anger will always be there.

Giving the spoilers to Dead Ever After is exactly the same. It's bad enough to tell people the ending, but to do it before the book is even released ought to get you a one way ticket to Hades. It's disrespectful to Charlaine Harris. It's disrespectful to the fans. And it's disrespectful to Sookie.

If you wanted to be a know-it-all, well, you got it. But you're always going to be a person I hate, you gossipy ratfink jerk.

Tuesday, April 23, 2013

My Plot is Doing Double Dutch

I'm driving myself crazy.

I have my outline. I've planned out my chapters. I know exactly what is supposed to happen. I can envision the scene in my mind like a movie. I've done my prewriting. But when I get to my computer, I find myself just staring at the screen and can't seem to start.

Somehow it feels as though I'm just waiting for something to happen. I can't tell what that thing is, unfortunately.

People have asked me if I'm afraid it won't be perfect. I don't think that's it.

My story has been in my mind for so long now, I feel as though it's already going. All the balls are in the air, I just have to jump in and juggle them.

Or to put it better, it's like my characters and my plot are doing a furious double dutch, and I have to jump in there and dance with it rather than trip over myself and mess the whole thing up.

 
SFC Double Dutch "Too Much Pressure"

Okay, so maybe it is fear of imperfection that's stopping me after all.

I'm going to take William Faulkner's advice and just write it down, even if it's bad. I can always come back and rework it, right? Right.

Just get it down.

Monday, April 22, 2013

Relatable

The pages are still blank, but there is a miraculous feeling of the words being there, written in invisible ink and clamoring to become visible. - Nabakov


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Thursday, April 18, 2013

Vampires in Pop Culture Feature: The Vampyre

Vampires have been a part of human mythology since before recorded history. However, they were generally shown as inhuman, ravenous monsters rather than the more mysterious and sexualized creatures of the night as we think of them today. That change is due in large part to a novella entitled The Vampyre written in 1819 by Dr. John Polidori.

Polidori was not originally an author. He was a physician, and a young one at that, earning his degree from the University of Edinburgh at the age of 19. Being an attractive prodigy, he caught the eye of the poet, Lord Byron, who hired him on as his personal physician and took him to Europe.

Byron was by then very famous throughout the continent, and the scandal of his divorce and speculation about his sexuality was rampant. Publisher John Murray offered Polidori 500 pounds to keep a journal of his travels with the poet. This journal became a source of contention between Polidori and Byron, who was on the one hand flattered by the attention and on the other annoyed and angered by the intrusion into his privacy. There has been speculation that Polidori and Byron became romantically entangled. Certainly, Polidori was fascinated with the famous poet, but whether the feeling was mutual is debatable.

During their travels, they spent time in Geneva, Switzerland, and in the summer of 1816 they met the poet, Percy Bysshe Shelley, and his soon-to-be-wife, Mary Godwin, and Mary's stepsister, Claire Clairmont. Shelley and Byron became fast friends. Due to the explosion of Krakatoa, the weather that year was frigid, and they were forced to stay indoors for much of the time. To entertain themselves, the group told ghost stories, and Byron suggested a writing contest to pass the time. Shelley's story was published posthumously along with a portion of his journal. Mary Godwin began and later published Frankenstein, the first real science fiction story ever written in English. Byron's own story was abandoned, but Polidori took the basic elements of that fragment and wrote what became one of the very first English vampire stories--The Vampyre.

Byron and Polidori quarrelled, partly because Byron felt Polidori had puffed up airs, delusions about becoming a famous author, and was not content with doing the job which he had been hired to do. He found Polidori's personality irritating, and Byron's journal is full of dismissive and acerbic references to Polidori's shortcomings. Byron also feared that Polidori's journal would expose too many of his secrets. Thus, Polidori was dismissed from his position. Devastated, he traveled through Italy and then returned to England, where his book was published two years later.

The main character of The Vampyre, Lord Ruthven, is pretty clearly based on Byron himself. Though Polidori had intended the book as a thinly veiled attack on the poet and a warning about his predatory nature, that intent backfired. In fact, the book was initially credited to Byron, a fact which irritated them both but which surely increased the sales of the story tremendously. The name Ruthven came from a character in a novel by Byron's famously spurned former lover, Lady Caroline Lamb, entitled Glenarvon, and Polidori intended it as a reminder to the readers of the scandal surrounding the poet.

Ruthven, the vampyre, is seductive and deadly. He is strong, masculine, handsome, and sneering at those he feels are beneath him. Readers today will recognize the basis for the English literary vampires which followed, including Dracula. Ruthven is a romantic, alluring, and devastating character who cuts a swath through a room full of women like a hot knife through butter.

On the other hand, the other main character, Aubrey, who finds himself drawn to Ruthven and who observes the terrible effects of being close to him, is meant to be a sympathetic character and most scholars agree that Polidori identified that character as being like himself. There is a clear (at least in my mind as a reader) homosexual subtext to the work, and Aubrey is drawn to Ruthven and seems most angered at the fact that Ruthven chooses young women as his victims rather than noticing him as a potential suitor. Aubrey comes off to me as a sad and bitter man who wishes he were smart enough, handsome enough, strong enough and who fails miserably. In the end, that is the impression which Polidori himself makes as well.

In trying to ruin Byron's reputation, Polidori only added to his fame. The novella was made into a French play the very next year and later into two operas.

As for Polidori himself, he committed suicide in 1821, leaving behind a string of gambling debts. His sister Charlotte transcribed his diary, omitting anything that might embarrass her family (which likely included anything relating to a possible relationship with Byron), and then she destroyed the original.

Whatever you might feel about the author himself, the book itself is a classic. The character of Ruthven is an archetype and serves as a model for all vampire authors who have followed.

The Vampyre is available as a free e-book through Project Gutenberg (http://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/6087).